AEAS寫作如何逐步擴(kuò)充細(xì)節(jié)

  AEAS高分作文標(biāo)準(zhǔn)考查的要點(diǎn)是：準(zhǔn)確的運(yùn)用詞匯、語法，能夠使用不同的短語和句型去表達(dá)自己的意思，而評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)主要從以下四個(gè)方面考慮：1.文章內(nèi)容；2.詞匯及語法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量；3.詞匯的準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用及句子結(jié)構(gòu)把握；4.全文結(jié)構(gòu)及上下文的連貫。
  論AEAS英語作文在短時(shí)間內(nèi)提高分?jǐn)?shù)的方法就是：從現(xiàn)有的文章當(dāng)中，逐步擴(kuò)充，學(xué)會(huì)在緊扣話題和要點(diǎn)的基礎(chǔ)上增加一些合理的“細(xì)節(jié)句型”。
  1.擴(kuò)展簡(jiǎn)單句
  簡(jiǎn)單句雖然能夠傳達(dá)意思，但是卻無法填充字?jǐn)?shù)，所以大家要學(xué)會(huì)在簡(jiǎn)單句型上添加合乎邏輯的成分，使得表達(dá)變得更加清晰。例如：We should keep on doing exercise，擴(kuò)展后：To keep up good spirits，we are advised to do regular workout， building up our bodies.
  2.增加主題句
  根據(jù)全文的結(jié)構(gòu)框架，當(dāng)主題不夠明確或有模糊含義的時(shí)候，可以適當(dāng)?shù)脑黾右恍┡c主題相關(guān)的句子?；蛘哌€可以根據(jù)題目要求，恰如其分的衍生出一些切主題的句子，起到協(xié)調(diào)文章架構(gòu)，避免文章單調(diào)的作用,還能夠讓****增加對(duì)你文章的好感。
  3.添加過渡句
  在寫作的過程中，恰當(dāng)?shù)氖褂靡恍┥舷挛牡你暯泳洌梢允刮恼碌慕Y(jié)構(gòu)變得更嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)和流暢。一些在使用單個(gè)連接詞的部分，可以用過渡句或者短語去代替，例如as far as I know，in addition，in a word等。
  附?？紵狳c(diǎn)話題：
  健康問題(Good health)
  1、in order to possess a healthy body, not only need we keep a nutritious diet and adequate sleep, it is crucial for individuals to form the habit of exercising regularly.(如何做)
  2、on the individual level, his exercises improve his health and mood as well.
  3、on the social level, the improvement in quality of life contributes vastly to a harmonious society. (意義)
  產(chǎn)品對(duì)消費(fèi)者、國(guó)家的傷害
  1、on the micro level, consumers are vastly hurt by these products, which might even be life-threatening.
  2、on the macro level, if low-quality products continue to spread, they will damage the normal function of healthy market economy.
  虛假宣傳
  Their emergence dues to the negative effect of a growing market economy. False advertisement seems to be most convenient to attract clients and increase profit.
  私家車(Private cars)
  1、the majority of people indulge in the convenience brought by cars while
  2、forgetting their harmful impact on the atmosphere.
  3、to improve and beautify the environment / human exploitation of natural resources has caused destruction that is for beyond our imagination.
  教育
  1、in my opinions, there needs to be a comprehensive renovation in the educational system in which new educational concepts are introduced.
  2、only by new teaching methods can we cultivate children into talents and elites who will meet the requirements of our society.
  正直誠(chéng)實(shí)：
  好處:
  1、enable honest person to succeed in work and life. (獲得成功)
  2、to work honestly to attain one’s life goal. (實(shí)現(xiàn)人生目標(biāo))
  3、to enhance reputation of a country.